11.My best
friend from home, Devin. We always edit each other’s essays and I recently
spent some time this week giving her feedback on a paper. I am sure she would
like to read my essay and would have good comments, especially on the Book of
Mormon aspect, as she is a non-member. Also, I haven’t called her very recently
so it would also be a good opportunity to catch up.
22. My Dad. I
like to talk about ideas and assignments with him because he always has good
insights and advice. I think he would like to read my essay and have a
conversation, on Skype or over the phone, about it.
33.My roommate
Rachel. She is very supportive and I am sure she would be willing to have me
read it to her. I also think it would be useful to share it in person to be
able to gage interest level on this newest draft as I’m reading and have an
open conversation.
44.My friend
Laura. I haven’t talked with her for a few months and I think this would be a
cool way to reconnect with her. I will probably share this with her over email,
and maybe call her. She also has a bigger family, so I think she will be able
to relate to the topic of my essay and it could be a missionary experience as
she is a non-member.
55.My little
sister Mary. It would be a good way to strengthen our relationship. It haven’t
been able to spend much time with her lately since we live so far apart, and I
think this would be a way to get in touch and have a good conversation. I bet she would be willing to watch some of the video intros as well.
66.Erin, one of
my ward members. I think she could really relate to my essay because she is
from a similar family background. She is frank and direct and I think she would
share about her own similar experiences and have interesting things to say
about my essay.
It sounds like you have a solid action plan that will bring you a lot of good feedback towards your final essay!
ReplyDeleteI'm excited for the non-members you'll be sharing your personal essay with. I think they'll be able to relate better with something from a friend rather than more formal missionary approaches.
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