I will discuss the stripling warriors in greater detail. I think I will talk about how young the boys were and how they're mothers felt about them leaving. I think I will also give some details about who Helaman is and why he is the way he is. I am also debating writing about why they are going to war. I'm not sure if that is too preachy so help me decide please!
I would like to change the wording in some areas because it is somewhat awkward to read out loud. I also use some of the same wording in multiple areas so if you guys have any recommendations I would greatly appreciate it. My roommate did not have many ideas for word changes.
My roommate and I haven't been getting a long because she thinks what I do for work is stupid and a waste of time, which I obviously don't believe that. It was extremely hard to share with her my personal feelings, but I think it brought us closer together. This essay allowed her to see more into my life and why I love what I do. I believe she now understands why I wake up at 6 in the morning every day and cry over the children I work with sometimes. She even began to understand why I talk about children all the time to her.