So is it illegal to comment about my own essay? jkI enjoyed this video much more than my own--because I felt that you simply portrayed this essay--and because it made it relatable to you--others can easily want to read the essay. Its like you almost had more ethos than myself. I feel like when salesmen come to the door wanting you to buy something, we don't even care if the product is awesome, we just dont want to buy it, but if a friend recommended it to you, you'd be much more likely to buy it. I felt the same way with this video, I would more likely read this essay because it was a recommendation from a friend. well done!