Monday, November 24, 2014

A Promised Land in the West: Video Introduction

Well in class I have been an advocate for creating a video featuring someone else's essay. In attempting to do so, I came to the conclusion that I would probably do a poor job representing someone else's beautiful work. So here is my own introduction to my own essay. A Promised Land in the West.


  1. I really like your sincerity. I also think you tied in the Book of Mormon very well without it seeming weird or forced.

  2. I too liked your BOM tie in but feel like you need to explicitly say those characters are from the BOM. If non-members are watching this they might need a little more direction to get the hint