Well in class I have been an advocate for creating a video featuring someone else's essay. In attempting to do so, I came to the conclusion that I would probably do a poor job representing someone else's beautiful work. So here is my own introduction to my own essay. A Promised Land in the West.
http://youtu.be/jXliR3Uo40g
I really like your sincerity. I also think you tied in the Book of Mormon very well without it seeming weird or forced.
ReplyDeleteI too liked your BOM tie in but feel like you need to explicitly say those characters are from the BOM. If non-members are watching this they might need a little more direction to get the hint
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