I like your video! I think you should be more brief with your experience so they will want to read it instead of you telling them about the whole time. I think you should do your video in Spanish also. It will add a special touch to it.
I loved your video, because i think it is so authentic and you! I agree with what Alyssa said. You may be one of many but your story is still very unique and personal and special. But i would be very interested in reading your essay!