Heartache and Near-Death Scares
Physical Experience
- hotel room in Washington D.C.
- hotel bathroom
- dark night, halfway through our school trip
- Washington D.C
- long, empty hotel hallway
- charter bus
- museums in Washington D.C
- shiny wheelchair
- large museum/building lobby
- springtime in Washington D.C. (flowers, buds, beautiful)
Scenes
- the big lobby of the building we were touring, with beautiful stained glass and ornate decorations and paintings
- it was rainy and overcast
- spring was blossoming
- the charter bus had comfortable bench seats
- the missionaries and the bishop all had black suits on, and they were broad-shouldered
Speech
- my mom was talking frantically to my dad on the phone
- I spoke with the black lady at the end of the hall
- my mom got a blessing from the missionaries and local bishop
- the entire school group gave a spoken prayer on the bus for my mom
- many people gave words of comfort and hope
- Roxanne Lemos told us about her mom's story
Emotion in the Moment
- fear of the unknown
- anxiety about being alone and about my mom
- love for my mom and others around me
- faith, from many types of people
- worry
- lonesomeness
- nervous
- embarrassed about having the wheelchair
- selflessness
- concern for my family (who were still at home in California)
People of Consequence
- Mom!! beautiful, fun, well-organized, focused, smart
- overweight black lady in charge of school trip keeping watch outside their doors (like a counselor)
- two LDS missionaries from a local ward
- a local LDS bishop
- James Warwick's mom- graceful
- Brett Martin's mom- homely and down-to-earth
- Jacob's mom- caring. Hispanic
- Roxanne Lemos, our school tour guide- much like an adopted grandmother, knowledgeable
- Mr. Smittee the bus driver- black, funny, kind, faith-filled
- Jacob- my closest friend, Hispanic
You have lots of very vivid memories from what would seem to be one event. That would make it very easy to turn this into a very riveting story for the reader. I'm not exactly sure what happened to who, but I would be interested in reading the story in its entirety to find out.
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