Heartache and Near-Death Scares
Physical Experience
hotel room in Washington D.C.
hotel bathroom
dark night, halfway through our school trip
Washington D.C
long, empty hotel hallway
charter bus
museums in Washington D.C
shiny wheelchair
large museum/building lobby
springtime in Washington D.C. (flowers, buds, beautiful)
Scenes
the big lobby of the building we were touring, with beautiful stained glass and ornate decorations and paintings
it was rainy and overcast
spring was blossoming
the charter bus had comfortable bench seats
the missionaries and the bishop all had black suits on, and they were broad-shouldered
Speech
my mom was talking frantically to my dad on the phone
I spoke with the black lady at the end of the hall
my mom got a blessing from the missionaries and local bishop
the entire school group gave a spoken prayer on the bus for my mom
many people gave words of comfort and hope
Roxanne Lemos told us about her mom's story
Emotion in the Moment
fear of the unknown
anxiety about being alone and about my mom
love for my mom and others around me
faith, from many types of people
worry
lonesomeness
nervous
embarrassed about having the wheelchair
selflessness
concern for my family (who were still at home in California)
People of Consequence
Mom!! beautiful, fun, well-organized, focused, smart
overweight black lady in charge of school trip keeping watch outside their doors (like a counselor)
two LDS missionaries from a local ward
a local LDS bishop
James Warwick's mom- graceful
Brett Martin's mom- homely and down-to-earth
Jacob's mom- caring. Hispanic
Roxanne Lemos, our school tour guide- much like an adopted grandmother, knowledgeable
Mr. Smittee the bus driver- black, funny, kind, faith-filled
Jacob- my closest friend, Hispanic
You have lots of very vivid memories from what would seem to be one event. That would make it very easy to turn this into a very riveting story for the reader. I'm not exactly sure what happened to who, but I would be interested in reading the story in its entirety to find out.
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