Showing posts with label word choice. Show all posts
Showing posts with label word choice. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 7, 2014

Jorg Klebingat Keeps It Simple

The talk I decided to analyze was given by Jorg Klebingat in the Saturday afternoon session of General Conference entitled  “Approaching the Throne of God with Confidence” and I’m going to compare to the talk given by President Uchtdorf entitled “Lord, is it I?”.


Elder Jorg Klebingat immediately surprised be because he was speaking in English with his clearly foreign name, considering the change of format and allowing speakers to use their native languages, but he didn’t despite the slight accent. He is from Germany which naturally gave him connections to to President Uchtdorf. Both are very competent in english, and very adept speakers despite the slight accent in their voices. They are both very concise in their statements, which makes their purpose and meaning so very clear. Having learned a foreign language myself, I fill at times it makes you simplify what you are going to say so that you get straight to the point so that no meaning is lost, because that is the most important thing. If you make it too complicated, then obviously your meaning is lost. 

This also allows both of them to speak with boldness and confidence in their words. Neither got overly emotional, but instead kept a very calm and collected tone throughout. They both told stories, it illustrate the points that they are trying to make. These stories are also concise enough so that you don’t forget the reason that they are probably telling the story for. The best thing about both of these speakers is simply their simple word choice. They use simple words, so that understanding is immediate. This keeps the attention of everyone in the audience and not just the english scholars.


Friday, September 26, 2014

Repetition from the Lord, 'wo, Wo, WO'!


1. Form Analyzed
I am going to focus my thoughts on language, specifically word choice.

2. Passage Analyzed
I decided to analyze 2 Nephi chapter 28 verses 15-16, including this excerpt:
"...Wo, wo, wo be unto them... for they shall be thrust down to hell!"

3. Annotated Text


4. Breakdown / Listing of things found:
The narrator's word choice is extremely bold and unique. The 'Lord God Almighty' uses the word 'wo' three times in a row, then one more time in the next sentence.

5. Interpretation: 
The use of words and phrases such as puffed up, thrust, revile, speedily, fully ripe, and tumble show the reader that the narrator has a sense of urgency. Some of these words are calls to action, and others are bringing forth that sense of urgency using brilliant and unusual descriptive words. The Lord's use of 'wo' three times in a row might mean that he is trying to get a point across in a very straight-forward way. It is hard to miss a triple warning!
6. Connections / Questions:
As I read other student's posts, I discovered that this is not the only time repetition and colorful language were recognized as being used in the Book of Mormon. In Elijah's post, Fiery Rhetoric- Jacob's Call to Repentance, he also found repetitive ideas and words. Why do you think we, as a people, continually forget the prophets' advice and warnings?