Showing posts with label dreams. Show all posts
Showing posts with label dreams. Show all posts

Wednesday, December 10, 2014

Home-made Dreamer

Almost every night I go back to that place... I go back there in my dreams. I smell the cookies fresh out of the oven, I see the smiling faces, and I know--I'm home. 






Part One: How it Was
It changed so much, but it still remains the same. When my parents first moved in, each room had a different color of carpet. It was the 70’s then, so the previous owners weren’t shy on their color choices either—red, orange, blue, green…all bright, shaggy, and blinding. But things eventually changed there. Tan carpet replaced the rainbow floor, and burgundy carpet was laid carefully in the master bedroom. It was a simple improvement to make the house a home.

Friday, November 7, 2014

1343 North, Dreamland USA (Personal Essay Draft 2)

*Revision Plan: From the feedback from the comments online, as well as from Dr. Burton, the memories of the childhood home are very relatable and very penetrable—something most people can connect to. Peers appreciated some of the detail, and I hoped to amplify that somewhat in this revision. I specifically aimed to create a more concrete, viewable characteristic of my home other than “bumpy tan walls”. Another aspect of change is my focus on my dreams and how it could be related to Lehi’s dream. I also have more of a focus on characters rather than just setting.

Friday, September 19, 2014

The Universal Dream

 
Photo from: my.englishclub.com
Every child has a dream. To become something great, something that is marveled at; that is the universal dream. There is something deep within us that inspires us from birth to want to become something special. A fireman, astronaut, professional musician. The list goes on and on.
Photo from: kidsdreamspot.com
There is one thing in common with these dreams: virtuosity. Becoming something above and beyond the average person. To become so skilled and fluent in one thing that you shine above the rest.
 A main theme in the book, Added Upon by Nephi Anderson, is virtuosic excellence, although not in the way we normally view it.

It came in the criticism of Sardus’ love of music. His friend Homan tells him, “I think there is danger in it. Some I know who neglect every other duty except the cultivation of a certain gift.”

At first, this makes no sense. How could working towards that childhood dream, that universal goal, be so terrible? But Homan continues.
Homan explains, “I think we ought to grow into a perfectly rounded character, cultivating all of Father’s gifts to us, but not permitting any of them to become an object of worship.”

Delsa affirms Homan’s stance, saying, “It is well enough to excel at one thing, but that should not endanger our harmonious development.”
Photo from: questforgod.org
And here we find a continuous theme throughout the book. The author expands our view of excellence and that dream that we were all born with.
Orson F. Whitney exhorts all in his talk, Home Literature, to rise up in our own sphere and to be like Shakespeare, Goethe, and Carlyle.  He says of them, “[they brought] rich treasures of inspired thought and intelligent research into the lap of humanity, giving birth to civilization and filling earth with fame and glory.”
He shows us that it is not enough to improve one aspect of our lives. No, we should be striving toward a much higher goal. In the eternal scope that the novel, Added Upon, places us in, the goal becomes excellence in more than just one aspect of our lives.

 The goal becomes excellence in every aspect of our lives.