tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post9051311713270927290..comments2023-09-28T08:04:28.949-06:00Comments on Literary Mormonism: A Modern-day MoroniGideonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13328578010572353558noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-87964625551202727782014-11-10T11:18:57.672-07:002014-11-10T11:18:57.672-07:00The detail of each scene that you set up was very ...The detail of each scene that you set up was very vivid and made me also feel like I was there with you. The way that you compared your brother to Moroni was done very well. I too look up to my older brother in much the same way and feel the same way towards him as well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10930715811436073655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-34456318679101282422014-11-09T13:55:43.998-07:002014-11-09T13:55:43.998-07:00I thought you applied your revisions very well int...I thought you applied your revisions very well into this next draft. I particularly liked the full circle that came from using the word Green. I felt it was an effective literary device, and overall had a good mix of scene setting and personal reflection. I think I would like to see more of a connection with Captain Moroni, why he was your childhood hero and why it connected with your brother.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16005571099906869985noreply@blogger.com