tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post4871525789366910321..comments2023-09-28T08:04:28.949-06:00Comments on Literary Mormonism: A Skateboarder's RemorseGideonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13328578010572353558noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-90962998443534144802015-02-01T12:03:48.063-07:002015-02-01T12:03:48.063-07:00Ha ha sorry about laughing, but it is pretty funny...Ha ha sorry about laughing, but it is pretty funny. Writing-wise, you had a good balance between detail and still keeping it to the point. I also really liked the dialogue, which made the situation seem more real to me.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02902927465722295043noreply@blogger.com