tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post4684670877897255990..comments2023-09-28T08:04:28.949-06:00Comments on Literary Mormonism: Title of Liberty Gideonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13328578010572353558noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-35100513224837569082014-11-19T19:53:26.437-07:002014-11-19T19:53:26.437-07:00I love that you "set the stage", so to s...I love that you "set the stage", so to speak. I've been in that room thousands of times and you captured the magic perfectly. <br /><br />I like your Moroni reference. I love that you eased into it by talking about mom's strategy and battle stance. Maybe after the Moroni reference, you could circle back around to how it relates to mom in more ways than just her Dr Mario time. Because, I know how much mom is like Moroni, (because of her character and spirit), but do others get it? A glimpse of the real woman? <br /><br />But maybe focusing on what she does and how she does it and what she's made of would distract from the awesomeness of her secret Nintendo hobby. :) dang, mom is so cute. <br /><br />Love, tbobbyTarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03870166407950046866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-52142082058356285152014-11-19T12:09:10.960-07:002014-11-19T12:09:10.960-07:00I love that you give background to the story and t...I love that you give background to the story and then you relate it back to the Book of Mormon. I feel like we're able to better understand why you admire your mom and then how she makes you think of Captain Moroni.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15596799903207542168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-60036474055800459582014-11-19T10:46:52.903-07:002014-11-19T10:46:52.903-07:00I really love this post. I think that it clearly i...I really love this post. I think that it clearly illustrates the character of your mother in this situation. Your tie in to The Book of Mormon was wonderful. The only thing I would say about it is that non-members will not understand the last line of your post, "This is her Title of Liberty." As a member of the church, I see this as a very strong and engaging ending point, but non-members will have no clue what that means. Overall, I enjoyed your personal narrative so much and look forward to seeing where it goes!<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com