tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post3730096496629323886..comments2023-09-28T08:04:28.949-06:00Comments on Literary Mormonism: Touching LivesGideonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13328578010572353558noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-74370479549804086572014-11-10T11:29:57.409-07:002014-11-10T11:29:57.409-07:00I liked how you added the details that, like Lizzy...I liked how you added the details that, like Lizzy said, answered some of my questions when I read the first draft. I like how you said you froze in disbelief and then tied that to King Limhi's wife. It's something that we can all relate to, and I really enjoyed the celebration of Jared's life. I felt like I knew him because of your descriptions, and I could picture the love in his eyes.Tori Fawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14491290460688365087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-27992735051598307562014-11-10T10:37:52.398-07:002014-11-10T10:37:52.398-07:00I thought the way you related the Book of Mormon s...I thought the way you related the Book of Mormon story was great. You helped me understand that Book of Mormon story from a very human point of view. What you had written before really helped with that by helping me understand how it would feel to lose somebody who's close to you. Then, with that Book of Mormon story, you described someone who felt that too. I think this would make me curious about the Book of Mormon, so I think this would be a great story to share with nonmembers.Andrew Olsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17139809405955476153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-39594240067833921402014-11-07T14:50:56.748-07:002014-11-07T14:50:56.748-07:00I noticed a few of the specific changes you made a...I noticed a few of the specific changes you made and I thought they were good. You answered some of the questions I had had the first time I read it--so I really appreciated those few more details. Lizzy Hiller Sainsbury https://www.blogger.com/profile/03496074123105558684noreply@blogger.com