tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post243273269114516874..comments2023-09-28T08:04:28.949-06:00Comments on Literary Mormonism: At least someone can relateGideonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13328578010572353558noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-27711091349525334972015-02-09T15:09:52.709-07:002015-02-09T15:09:52.709-07:00That's so cool that your mom gave such helpful...That's so cool that your mom gave such helpful feedback! I think that is one hard part about sharing writing with those that love us- they sometimes just say it's great because they love us haha. But your mom did a great job with constructive feedback.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02902927465722295043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-91737106775483400322015-02-09T11:18:57.925-07:002015-02-09T11:18:57.925-07:00This is adorable! I love that your mom really enga...This is adorable! I love that your mom really engaged with your writing, and not just read it and said it was amazing because you are her child. I think this is really productive feedback for your piece and it helps that it is so personal, too. I really like this.DanielleAmandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16043562989775219271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3193051508933511187.post-74198628662007375822015-02-09T08:52:02.233-07:002015-02-09T08:52:02.233-07:00I loved your comment about your mom's comment ...I loved your comment about your mom's comment on your post being more literary! As a side note, I have noticed in your comments and in your posts that you have a great wit and humor that really adds a lot to your writing so good job! I think "just" mom is the best. I love when my mom reads my work because I feel like she knows me better than anyone so if someone is going to understand my writing it is going to be her.Paige Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11247954231648357794noreply@blogger.com